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Carving out a path that is my own through the hilarity of the sacred profanities of life I merge into chaos and order, finding the inner balance within.

Monday, January 30, 2012

Hope Springs Eternal

Each poem became a love letter,
delicately crafted through blood and tears,
laughter and fears
Each word carefully hand-picked,
painstakingly writ

Floating on a tapestry of webs,
the destination obscure,
delivery uncertain,
buoyed forward 
by faltering hope
that springs eternal. 
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4 comments:

  1. Agha MajidJanuary 30, 2012 at 3:41 PM

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    Very simple but obscure..like a perfectly sunny day suddenly filled with black clouds..the balance is quite intriguing..one lies in the umbra while the other is in gods breathe..

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    1. Maya NadeemFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:42 AM

      your comments are like small miniature poems themselves, i love reading them (i'm assuming your the person who left me feedback previously as well, though i could be wrong). thank you for the vivid imagery you leave me with, it allows me to look at my own poetry from another perspective or rather adds a layer of dimension to it, as well as it stands on it's own as its own separate entity.

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    2. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2012 at 11:34 AM

      You 're correct..its shiversome how well you can connect to the vibes of my comments...I am flattered...

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